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“ Tablet Computer in School : Educational or Recreational ? ”Matthew Godfrey, Telegraph 

In the article of “ Tablet Computer in School : Educational or Recreational ? ”Matthew Godfrey, Telegraph wrote that tabletis the essential to entertain the kids during traffic congestion. On the other hand, the tablet helps the family preventing their child from uncontrollable.

According to author, the student can easily utilise the digital media both visual and voice recording which encouragethe student to increase concentration.The tablet gives many positive outcomes because using ipad facilitate the studentscommunication such as sharing information and ideas, working on their school assignment together with other students.The ipadthat promote the students more engage on their school assignment. Another reason in the article shows that using high tech digital accessories should promote the students more interacting with their study and also it is easier to store in theirmemory. John McKeown mentioned that there is no point to break up with technology. I agree with the author Matthew Godfrey mentioned in the article because the computer and tablet gives the students many positive outcomes not only the recreation but also provide great benefit for their education.

 Social Networking is helpful

Social networking is helpful because can communicate with peopleall over the world. People can use social networking in different purpose.Nowadays, the social networking influences from old age to younger generation which take the powerful role in communication. Social networking provides a lot of great benefit in different ways. In the article“Social Networking Makes Twits of Us All,” Maria Quinlan mentioned that people dating through social networking by calling video and communicate, watch video together via online. And then the couple end up with getting married lives their life happily. Another example, one of my friend met the man when she started using Facebook who was from her native town. They communicate with Facebook. After knowing each other very well they fell in love and end up with happy marry life. In other words, social networking help match making and help people in communication in meaningful way therefore it is helpful.

Another reason, social networking is not only for communication but also useful for the work and organization. Social networking promotesstaff relations. In other words, social networking impresses me that can spread the information to the staff fast and effectively. In the article“Social Networking Makes Twits of Us All,” Maria Quinlan mentionedthat company and enterprise are meeting, consulting, and conductinglectures through social networking. For example, the place where I work using Facebook social networking group chat for sharing information and discuss work related stuff. Therefore, due to social networking can use multipurpose with a lot of function, social networking can be useful.

Citation sentences 

(1) “Social Networking Makes Twits of Us All,” Maria Quinlan : And people date online using webcams to watch movies together_andwhatever else you do with webcam. Then, they end up getting married, probably online and live happily ever after.

(2) “Social Networking Makes Twits of Us All,” Maria Quinlan :Business and organizations use phone and web conferencing, and even have seminars and lectures through the internet. 

 

Is social networking helpful or harmful?

 WA#2: 

Topic:  Is social networking helpful or harmful?  Why?   (You cannot write about eye problems, physical health problems, suicide, depression, or bullying.) 

You will write two paragraphs on this topic.  Both paragraphs will either be about it being helpful or harmful.  You can use ideas from class discussions and from your own life.  

The first draft of paragraph #1 will be due on Thursday, October 14. This will be for peer review and discussion.  The first draft of paragraph #2 will be due on Tuesday, October 19 for peer review. The final draft of both paragraphs will be due to me on Canvas on Saturday, October 23. 

Each paragraph needs to follow these guidelines:

1. Begin with a topic sentence that has a clear controlling idea.  The topic sentence needs to respond to the prompt.

2. End with a concluding sentence that rephrases the topic sentence. 

3. Include both general and specific support to explain the topic sentence.

4. Use at least two of the vocabulary words from vocabulary log #1 and/or vocabulary list #2. Put the word initalics. 

5. Include at least one adjective clause and two adverb clauses.  Highlight the clauses.

6. Be typed and double-spaced.

7. Be at least 200 words.  Include word count. 

***Include a transition word or phrase between the two paragraphs to clearly connect them.

*** You must use a paraphrase from one of the readings (Social Networking Makes Twits of Us All or Social Networking Benefits Validated) in at least one of the paragraphs. Underline the paraphrase.  The paraphrase must include the name of the author and the name of the article. Also, include a sentence to explain the paraphrase. At the end of the writing assignment, write down the exact sentence that you paraphrased.  See the example that I gave you. 

What is Academic Writing?

acaedemic writing 1

 Australia is the most famous country because ———-

United states is the most co2 produce country because ————

There are two part of writing . 

(1) Student academic writing  and 

(2) Expert academic writing ( for publication or journals ) 

The standard and requirement is the same 

1. Argument type
2. Research proposal 

Cohesive 

Well structure 

Focus 

You need to understand clearly 

Citation 

It is not simply describe 

Adjective clause

 My brother, who lives nearby is a teacher . 

How many brother do I have ?

The women that i saw yesterday brought me dinner. ( no commas)

Adjective clause 

Tall building 

Smelly cat

Argumentative assistant 

 (1) We are expecting days that will melt the tarmac. (Material used for surfacing road ) consisting stone mixed with tar.(adjective clause ) 

(2) Dogs that have rolled in mud are not allowed upstairs . (Adjective clause ) 

(3) Stars that shone like car headlamps illuminated the field. (Shine /shone/shing ) emit light , polish

(4) The carpet that last year you bought have rotted.

(5) The follies which ma man regrets most in his life are those which he didnot commit when he had the opportunity.

(6) THe rat that (relative pronoun)  John (subject ) saw (verb ) yesterday was in the kitchen earlier 

(7) The tramp who claimed to have a limp sprinted after the bus 

The relative pronoun can be omitted

 

The carpet that you bought last year have gone moldly.

The carpet you bought last yera have goond moldly. (Omitted the relative pronoun (that) see the above sentence 

The filim which you recommended scared the kids half to death. The flim that you recommened scared the kid half to death

(Limp= walk with difficultly typically beause of a damage leg or food ) 

Adjective clause

I enjoyed ESL class. I took it last quarter. 

Combine these two sentences making  second one into an adjective clause .

( who)   (whom ) which (that ) and blank.

(1) I enjoyed ESL class which i took last quarter 

(2) I enjoyed ESL class that i took last quarter 

( 3) I enjoyed the ESL class I took last quarter . (Blank)

The book was about the beginning of the universe I read it last night

* The book which I read last night was about the beginning of the universe 

* The book that I read last night was about the beginning of the universe.

* THe book I read was about the beginning of the universe.

Mr. Norman whom  I took ESL 253 with , taught me a lot . ( I took ESL 253 with him ) 

The teacher whom I took last quarter taught me about grammar.

My mom , whom i saw yesterday , brought me dinner.

My mom , who got her covid vaccine in February, was so happyto be able to spend time with her family.

(Book= thant / which ) 

My friend who has two boys works from home.

Lacie, who has two boys, works from home.

My best friend is a nurse . She lives in Oregon.

My best friend who lives in Oregon is a nurse. ( How many best friend does a person have ? )